Kevin Farran
Nov 13, 2023

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I had stopped reading your submissions some time ago because, though I thought the points made were worthy, I found the delivery tedious. Now I sense an obese insertion of drama is lacing your sentences. In truth, I felt it was a bulletin delivered by John Cleese in a finer Monty Python moment, ( I could not get his voice off the page.) this is truly an accolade, if intended.

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Kevin Farran
Kevin Farran

Written by Kevin Farran

Kamakura based writer, lover of Great Danes, vintage cars, good red wine, bonsai and the Bard

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